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ARTCROW

Guess who's back?

RANK #6
DISPLAY SCORE 7.32 / 10
  • 💯 Perfect 10 — Vocals from LEX the Lexicon Artist
  • 💯 Perfect 10 — Production from LEX the Lexicon Artist
  • 💯 Perfect 10 — Challenge from Mark Cooper
  • 🎤 Vocal Standout 8.2 / 10 avg across judges
  • 🎛️ Production Powerhouse 8.0 / 10 avg across judges
  • 🛡️ Wide Appeal no judge ranked you in their bottom third
  • 🌊 Crowd Surfer on 42/74 ballots (57%)
  • 🎯 100 Club 186 plays on SoundCloud
  • ⭐ SoundCloud Rapper top 3 on SoundCloud with 12 likes
  • ⭐ Local Hero top 3 in VPC-site hearts with 2 likes
  • ⭐ Triple Heart Threat likes on YouTube, SoundCloud, AND the VPC site (17 total)
  • 📦 Full Package audio + art + lyrics + both writeups
  • 📝 Storyteller 1,511 characters across both writeups

TOTAL REACH — 246 plays · rank 2 / 23

  • SOUNDCLOUD 186
  • YOUTUBE 57
  • VPC SITE 3

TOTAL LIKES — 17 · rank 2 / 23

  • SOUNDCLOUD 12
  • YOUTUBE 3
  • VPC SITE 2

LVL SELECT : KYE

Open audio
Vocalist's challenge writeup

Crow sent me the beat pretty immediately after the challenge was announced and I immediately starting writing. But since the challenge called for a metaphorical approach it actually made it a little harder for me to write for some reason (OCD). I wasn't 'feeling' the song yet. After several more days of trying I took a break. Started back attempting a different verse on another song but then I wasn't 'feeling' that one. When I write I like to write to the beat. It informs the bars I create, lines I end or start on, on and usually the theme. Using found sounds to shape the challenge was a really fun task. it gave me a lot to work with lyrically when I was able to lock-in and thanks to a random sounds we created something special!

Producer's challenge writeup

90+% of the song material was recorded as a quick foley walk around my house with my phone. The next day I picked up a portable fan and recorded it to cover my bases and do a little more than re-pitching samples and using clips as wavetables or percussion layers. The sound of the motor shifting speeds and turning off ended up being the main sound across the piece. The bass, the mid-range synth pads and that kind of steel drum 'strumming' are all variations of that one sound. The strum comes from the re-pitched fan not being warped in time so the resonance kicks in and has a secondary effect that really drove the key and tone of the track. The only pre-existing sounds are the shaker, some kick and clap elements, and the "Ohhh Yeaaaa" sample is from Battery 4.

Lyrics
Have you killed your ego yet?
have you grabbed it by the throat?
have you slaughtered it?
have you seen your reflection 
move beyond view
murder your self worth
learn the real curse
is to kill what's inside you

on a lighter note
i got this idea
that i could break the sequence
you can do it too
all you gotta do is
put your head inside the oven
and preheat it til the beat switch
pull it out
pop it in a bell jar

and when I pop out
with the scythe 
and the cloak
and the death note
know to me
your ego is worth reaping

KILL YOUR EGO x4

I didn't lobby for my right to exist
but I might preach about it
sneaking up to my pulpit
I pull the bleachers out 
perform for your lineage
and even now
I jester at the thought
of your ego looking to take the scenic route
off spring
Midsomer
I'm making this a ritual 
I've been lost in the concepts of plans
since my spiritual
awakening 
this deconstructions
for the Tekkening
King of Iron Fists
with a wedding ring


Interstellar mosh pit
asteroids all around me
I'm feeling toxic
but you don't get the point
is to drill away your toxinx
you try to play games with me
but I'm not Johnny Moxon
even though I spit varsity
and part of me
is bluer than the sky 
above pardoning
the hardening
of my heart
was built on prophecy
and obviously
you can try to get like me
but you might never wanna think like me
you're too afraid to


KILL YOUR EGOx3


kill the facade
that you built up
turn it on its face
get Freudian with the nip tuck
it's all about the human race 
why do you have your eyes shut?
it's clockwork
get the specula
watch the spectacle
til your mind hurts
indoctrinate
your people
did you know
her and him and I are all equal?
you and me
are phantom seams

menacing
how the mincing of words
is inherently evil

kill your ego

kill your ego


kill your ego

JUDGES' BREAKDOWN

  1. Klopfenpop

    8.67/10 score · rank #2 of 23
    VOCALS 9
    PRODUCTION 8
    CHALLENGE 9

    This beat is really cool. I love the sound design and the arrangement. All the little ear candy is wonderful. I love the scratched elements! I think the vocal mix sounds really good, but I’d love to hear a bit of clean up work on the vocal tracks. Subtle rhythm correction on the accompanying vocals to line the syllables up with the main vocal makes a world of difference in how a rap vocal hits the ear. The opening line feels sloppy just because the two vocal parts aren’t quite perfectly synced. Even with that, this might be the best intro of the round. This beat knocks, the raps go hard af. I love everything else about this song.

  2. Mark Cooper

    8.33/10 score · rank #10 of 23
    VOCALS 7
    PRODUCTION 8
    CHALLENGE 10

    ● As rappers we always try to find a way to deal with egos and physically taking it out like it's a real person is a nice touch for a metaphor. Smooth hook with the melodic pad. Lyric delivery is solid and has a good vocal tone. The overall sound of the track is very clear and straight to the point. ● Production: smooth beat and mix throughout the track. I like the sine lead and bass lines you used in this track. I was able to drive the track home supporting the vocalist's approach and feeling in the song.

  3. Ben Tarkus

    7.33/10 score · rank #3 of 23
    VOCALS 8
    PRODUCTION 7
    CHALLENGE 7

    A very strong R1 entry. The build in the beginning took me a moment to find the flow, but the lyrics come in hard and fast. The phrase 'interstellar mosh pit' really resonates with me and the vibe that comes with it practically drips from this song at every turn. One of my favorites this round.

  4. Richie Branson

    7.00/10 score · rank #10 of 23
    VOCALS 7
    PRODUCTION 7
    CHALLENGE 7

    Really nice lyrics, with a nice flow to boot. kill your ego hook is a nice start, might have given a call and response type of format to it to expand on that foundation a bit. Beat is nice, great execution in terms of soundscape and evolution. Feels like the hook part could use something, can’t put my finger on it though.

  5. LEX the Lexicon Artist

    8.00/10 score · rank #6 of 23
    VOCALS 10
    PRODUCTION 10
    CHALLENGE 4

    Beautiful imagery and incredible writing. I like the hook - simple and effective. The composition is sinister and I love the wahh synths and the chord progression, they give the track this feeling of being suspended/in limbo. I like the west coast plucks. The arrangement is incredible. Polished production is not surprising from this group. “Interstellar mosh pit asteroids all around me I'm feeling toxic” Just one of the many vivid images that this writer is so good at. The metaphor is not clear. I.e., I cannot break it down into “THING A is being compared to THING B”. My best guess is: grim repeater = psychedelic drugs. I 100% appreciate what you are doing with your objectively excellent pen, but it didn’t quite hit the mark for the specific challenge.

Audience score and rank

AUDIENCE SCORE

5.68 / 10

Aggregated from 74 ballots cast by the public.

AUDIENCE RANK

4 / 23

Out of 23 teams competing this round.

  • 42 voters ranked them in their top 10
  • 22 voters had them in their top 5
  • 3 voters picked them as their #1 favorite

FINAL BLEND

The final score was a 7.32. The song received an average voter score of 5.68 from the community, and an average judge score of 7.87.

The display score blends the audience and judges' contributions at 25%/75%. Here's how ARTCROW's 7.32 broke down:

1.42 from audience
5.90 from judges

(5.68 × 25%) + (7.87 × 75%) = 7.32

YOUR SEASON SO FAR

  1. Round 1 · 7.32 / 10 · rank #6
  2. Round 2 · 7.97 / 10 · rank #5 PERSONAL BEST
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