- Perfect 10 — Challenge from Mark Cooper
- Challenge Champion 8.2 / 10 avg across judges
- 100 Club 113 plays on SoundCloud
- Full Package audio + art + lyrics + both writeups
- Storyteller 1,141 characters across both writeups
TOTAL REACH — 160 plays rank 10 / 23
- SOUNDCLOUD 113
- YOUTUBE 41
- VPC SITE 6
TOTAL LIKES — 3 rank 22 / 23
- SOUNDCLOUD 3
- YOUTUBE 0
Cultivate
Vocalist's challenge writeup
The metaphor in this song uses the idea that the deliberate daily regimen of farming (i.e. bringing plants from seed to fruition) is a plan for how one may also obtain life's goals, desires and objectives.
Producer's challenge writeup
There are two elements that meet the "resampled field recording" challenge. For the first, the pad (which can first be heard in the very beginning, behind the intro skit vocals) started life as an airport luggage scanner machine. I set my phone to record a voice memo as it was going through while I was traveling. I then discovered there was a beautiful, consistent frequency from the scanner, so I isolated a few different harmonics of it, resampled each of them as separate wav files, then turned it into a pad in my sampler with some processing. It can be heard throughout. The second element is the "plinky" melodic sound that is present in the verses, which started life as a squeaky, wet shower wall, being rubbed by my finger, and again being recorded as just a voice memo. I took that sound, ran it through some aggressive pitch correction, resampled it and processed it a few times, and turned it into the instrument you hear.
Lyrics
"Wow.. grandpa left me this whole farm. But there's all these boulders and fallen trees. Ugh… it just feels so overwhelming. Where do I even start? Oh look, he left a letter addressed to me…" My dear grandchild, an advice heirloom. The bells I bequest are the ones that rings true A moment will arise when you'll feel so confused And inside this tune is how you must move Groove, cuz soon, your hours will be up Don't waste sunlight when you could be on the huss Trust the earth in all its concepts Mush the dirt with working biceps Chickens will prevent your overslept Prep and reps are phenomenal first steps Kept lists break apart the complex Grab your can cause here's the logic Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate Your harvest you must Cultivate Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate... Leaves drop with the environmental stress So when tending your field you gotta carefully caress When tilling the soil use the actions of direct Cuz farm life is best when treated with respect Don't guess, inspect, and do your research When mother nature speaks. really hear her Give growth spacious plots with room to glean Till mulch graciously for all ya seeds Hone your green thumb. Yes cultivate it Understand, not demand. It's no debate with Not too tight so the life gets plenty of light Perlite inside so hydration stays right Don't worry or hurry through the process Use the tools you've earned on turning the pot mix Balance is the challenge. Avoid the toxic And when you dig it enough, you'll say “Yeah I got this.” Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate Your harvest you must Cultivate Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate Your harvest you must Cultivate Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate Your harvest you must Cultivate Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate... Next season, fruition and mild success On your laurels, however, you must not rest Don't spoil the toil. Build refinement Compounding ground til stability is met ponds will clear from fighting farm fears breathe deep and obstacles disappear Plows easily steer with the proper gear Strategize supplies to survive failure Do your darndest to upgrade your harvest Hearty parsnips come from worked gardens Ya pumpkins carvings from perfect farthest Character hardens as quantity 'largens. Make some bargains, learn when to compromise See the bigger picture through a farmer's eyes Plant plenty of seeds cuz some don't arise And pass on these secrets before your demise Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate Your harvest you must Cultivate Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate Your harvest you must Cultivate Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate Your harvest you must Cultivate Ya gotta water ya crops There's no debate...
JUDGES' BREAKDOWN
LEX the Lexicon Artist
6.33/10 score rank #16 of 23VOCALS 6PRODUCTION 7CHALLENGE 6THING 1 is being compared to THING 2 Life = farming OR you yourself = farming I think there is a good attempt at metaphor here, but because life/oneself is so general, I get lost in the metaphor as the song goes on. What do crops, green thumbs and harvests refer to in life terms? There’s an effort made towards it which I commend, but the wordplay and analogies could be drawn more clearly and cleverly. Right now it’s just “hey life is horticulture and here’s what you do in horticulture”. The flow is a bit repetitive, all rhymes land at the end of the bar, and most rhymes are 1 or 2 syllables. Consider varying your meter, rhyming beyond the same measure, and multisyllabic rhymes aligning stressed/unstressed syllables and internal vowels. The production is perfectly serviceable and pleasant, but a bit repetitive for me as well (piano, sample, bass, synth line - not many switch ups/dynamics). I did really like the synth brass solo at the end, an inspired choice!
Mark Cooper
9.33/10 score rank #3 of 23VOCALS 9PRODUCTION 9CHALLENGE 10● Such a groove of a track. Clean mix and vocals. Environmental metaphors are a rare topic and I'm here for it. I enjoy the filter on the vocals (perhaps an air filter haha) give the track a whole different feel. Along with lyrics telling a story of the life cycle of plants growing. ● Production- soulful! Great work and had such a breath of fresh air feeling throughout the song. Drum and melody are leveled pleasantly. Great job
Richie Branson
7.33/10 score rank #6 of 23VOCALS 7PRODUCTION 7CHALLENGE 8Vocal energy is in the right pocket for this kind of beat. Flow has a nice swing that marches the beat as well. All of it’s serviceable, I suppose. Beat is cool, piano melody very jazzy. Bassline is proper in presence and melody. Vocal mix seems a bit crunched. Particularly during the hook.
Klopfenpop
8.00/10 score rank #6 of 23VOCALS 7PRODUCTION 8CHALLENGE 9This is a cute concept in a good way. The beat vibe is perfect. You’ve got some natural smoothness to your voice and flow. I do fear you suffer from recording while sitting down and maybe reading your vocals while recording them? I would challenge you to memorize your vocals and get some time practicing them without your brain having to do the work of recalling them while you’re performing them. It really makes a world of difference n a recording. You can really let the emotions flow through your words when you lose that layer of neural load. Your sung vocals sound fantastic! I absolutely love these background vocals. I wish the overall vocal mix was a little less mid-heavy. Even with vocals that aren’t recorded on expensive mics can sound super clean with a some careful EQ treatment. I absolutely love the drum work throughout the song. This is a great arrangement in general and the synth solo at the end is just right and ties a perfect bow on top of this song. The wet shower wall finger squeak might be my favorite found sample instrument of the round. What an absolutely delightful noise.
Ben Tarkus
7.00/10 score rank #6 of 23VOCALS 6PRODUCTION 7CHALLENGE 8A solid bop across the board for R1, and bonus points for connecting the message here with both a greater positive philosophy and a fantastic game like Stardew. I've found myself come back to this song multiple times now and it's a great way to uplift a morning.
Audience score and rank
AUDIENCE SCORE
Aggregated from 74 ballots cast by the public.
AUDIENCE RANK
Out of 23 teams competing this round.
- 30 voters ranked them in their top 10
- 14 voters had them in their top 5
- 3 voters picked them as their #1 favorite
FINAL BLEND
The final score was a 6.89. The song received an average voter score of 4.77 from the community, and an average judge score of 7.60.
The display score blends the audience and judges' contributions at 25%/75%. Here's how Idealistic Mystics's 6.89 broke down:
(4.77 × 25%) + (7.60 × 75%) = 6.89
YOUR SEASON SO FAR
- Round 1 6.89 / 10 rank #11
- Round 2 7.94 / 10 rank #7 PERSONAL BEST