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The Creative Complex ‘26

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RANK #16
DISPLAY SCORE 6.31 / 10
  • 📦 Full Package audio + art + lyrics + both writeups

TOTAL REACH — 107 plays · rank 22 / 23

  • SOUNDCLOUD 81
  • YOUTUBE 22
  • VPC SITE 4

TOTAL LIKES — 4 · rank 17 / 23

  • SOUNDCLOUD 3
  • YOUTUBE 1

BodiesBodiesBoides

Open audio
Vocalist's challenge writeup

I recorded my otomotone and my voice I tried to use the otomotone and my voice as the backing

Producer's challenge writeup

In true zombie fashion, I wanted to make a commentary on the worst of humanity's need to own and conquer everything. It starts from an individual stand point and slowly morphs into this amorphous blob that needs to monopolize everything. Owning things for the sake of power to become something but in the end, no matter how much they consume they will never be fulfilled and like a zombie disease, greed can spread if unchecked.

Lyrics
Silence of the lambs
nothings in bad taste 
Taking what i can
Im on a rampage
All is 
Up
For
Grabs
I'll eat it half baked
Matter
Eater lad
Im in a bad place


Nothings too sour 
When I got to devour 
Cultivating mass
As I absorb the power


Man eating man
Eating man
Eating mold


If i take enough in
Might have enough for a soul




If you take enough of the bodies 
You can be Somebody
3x


If you take enough bodies, bodies, bodies, bodies, bodies, bodies.


Thriller march down market street
The body droning on 
for one purpose,
Need somebody to eat.
Stacking bodies on top of bodies
As the bodies repeat
Until there's only one rule
The bodies have to increase
If they don't body somebody body
Thier body will cease
Body so panicked about the body
The body don't sleep 
The body doesn't know peace
Only pieces of body trails
The litter of feast
From the bodies they reap


And that's their whole thing


They think their playing defense 
Acquisition is the mission 
through fabricated 
Pretense 
There's no discrimination from the good or the bad
Or the cretins
Katamari Non believers
Before they sink their teeth in


The body only knows bodies
Only sees others as bodies to add
Bodies of people,
water,
Of course they take Bodies of land
Somebody's told body's nobody
Without the bodies absorbed 
Body embodies insatiable greed
Of bodies engorged


If you take enough of the bodies 
You can be Somebody
3x


If you take enough bodies, bodies, bodies, bodies, bodies, bodies.

JUDGES' BREAKDOWN

  1. LEX the Lexicon Artist

    8.33/10 score · rank #5 of 23
    VOCALS 8
    PRODUCTION 8
    CHALLENGE 9

    Thing 1 being compared to Thing 2 Society / Capitalism = A Cannibal or Killer. But it goes further, “The body only knows bodies Only sees others as bodies to add Bodies of people, water, Of course they take Bodies of land” “The Body” here referring to the “system” and those in power taking whatever they want, and “take enough bodies” referring to… literally kiling people. genius. I got insane full body chills from the layering of vocals and the production meshing together. 1:50 - AAAAAAAAAAAAA (DEMENTED SCREECHING) Excellent incorporation of the singing layers + the “ee-ee” sample. Eerie. The prod is a bit muddy overall and could use some EQ although I think part of this is intentional. The deep soothing voice of the vocalist and the lofi sound of the track enhances the creepiness Really like the various uses of the syllables “body” in different words and contexts Not sure how you captured the visceral horror of a man eating zombie in the composition and arrangement of the song. But it works exceptionally well and I was scared shitless. I don’t think I could listen to this at midnight.

  2. Ben Tarkus

    5.67/10 score · rank #22 of 23
    VOCALS 5
    PRODUCTION 5
    CHALLENGE 7

    I think the challenge here was met in full force, but I struggled with the beat and vocals at times here. The droning works for the challenge itself but I think against the overall song delivery.

  3. Richie Branson

    6.33/10 score · rank #19 of 23
    VOCALS 6
    PRODUCTION 6
    CHALLENGE 7

    I feel like I can be somebody. Hook is strangely catchy at times. I feel like the overall structure of the song might roam a bit too wildly. Beat is delightfully creepy. Vocal mix is kind of all over the place. Needs to be tighter.

  4. Mark Cooper

    7.00/10 score · rank #19 of 23
    VOCALS 7
    PRODUCTION 6
    CHALLENGE 8

    First thing, I could say for sure that I embodied the entire song! Haha. This was such a clever way of using one word and making it a metaphor to string along with common phrases in the verse. Well done. Only issue would be the transitions of the verses to the hooks were a little rough volume level wise and it was very noticeable. I feel the vocal harmonies throughout could be tucked more in the back with a saturation or filter to make it more ambient and less distracting throughout the mix. Other than that good work. ● Production: love the use of the vocal portion for the drum/ snare combination. Very simple and minimal. As a producer I would recommend throwing a little more compression on the kick so it pops out more and gives the vocalist more support throughout the track. Solid track!

  5. Klopfenpop

    7.00/10 score · rank #14 of 23
    VOCALS 8
    PRODUCTION 5
    CHALLENGE 8

    OnlyOneRonin's flow is hypnotic in a good way. the vocals are a bit pitchy in spots, but most of that could have come down to part selection and blending in the mix. But I do really love the intentional pitch drift on "bodies bodies bodies". I love that the imagery of the metaphor paints a vivid picture itself. I can see the piles of bodies. This is a really insightful angle on the way capitalist forces can eat through entire communities of people. The body-based production was a perfect choice--I love a good meta. This beat would fit right in on an episode of Doug. This mix is real rough though. It takes a lot of careful treatment to make all body sound really fill out a mix. On the beat and the vocals, I'm hearing mostly midrange. They could also use some treatment like compression and EQ to clean it up a bit.

Audience score and rank

AUDIENCE SCORE

4.63 / 10

Aggregated from 74 ballots cast by the public.

AUDIENCE RANK

14 / 23

Out of 23 teams competing this round.

  • 30 voters ranked them in their top 10
  • 14 voters had them in their top 5
  • 1 voter picked them as their #1 favorite

FINAL BLEND

The final score was a 6.31. The song received an average voter score of 4.63 from the community, and an average judge score of 6.87.

The display score blends the audience and judges' contributions at 25%/75%. Here's how The Creative Complex ‘26's 6.31 broke down:

1.16 from audience
5.15 from judges

(4.63 × 25%) + (6.87 × 75%) = 6.31

YOUR SEASON SO FAR

  1. Round 1 · 6.31 / 10 · rank #16 PERSONAL BEST
  2. Round 2 · 5.71 / 10 · rank #20
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