- Full Package audio + art + lyrics + both writeups
- Climber +3 positions from Round 3
TOTAL REACH — 29 plays rank 12 / 21
- VPC SITE 29
TOTAL LIKES — 3 rank 18 / 21
- VPC SITE 3
AIR
Vocalist's challenge writeup
uh i made a lot of references to industrial bands and horror movies
Producer's challenge writeup
n/a
Lyrics
fishnet shirt plaid mini skirt death stare that'll put you in the dirt dance if you dare best be aware she punch the air air air air air air air four foot elleven platforms six seven giving you hell sending me to heaven dance if you dare melt in her stare she punche the punch the air i did that so goth i shit bats got aunt gladys asking for her wig back react to that doom we baboons in backrooms riding that broom capn clark back soon witness the graft we in with the craft high as giraffes aristocrats spray and pray the black parade full in paid no masquarade we malacaves exi st in shade stomp the floor till its concave clove ciggarettes and fishnets got a cold sweat from morrisey cassettes hocus pocus witches leave you mouths in stitches salem trial snitches must of missed the missive chainsmoke cats and chainsaw men the genesis evangelion kkmds no fdm bring back the goth again kkmds on the shit ginger root and bardock bliss pointy teeth and bondage straps jnco jeans and bucket hats a dj mixing mezzazine dancing like im palpatine double winning charlie sheen hair the color lima bean safety goggles neon dreads piercing on the rivet heads troma toxic janitors bouncing of the bannisters the heavey cream the 2 percent cooking up the kill intent the hate in bed the lust in space weaving my own basket case
JUDGES' BREAKDOWN
LEX the Lexicon Artist
6.00/10 score rank #21 of 21VOCALS 7PRODUCTION 6CHALLENGE 5so goth i shit bats is crazy work. Man I wish you guys would just take this competition more seriously rather than shitpost. There are some really good vivid bars in here and I really like the concept of a goth club anthem and the sound of the beat. The writing and beatmaking are both there, but it's just executed in such a slipshod way that it's hard to listen to or at least grade on the scale of the rest. I am giving the vox a 7 though because the interesting writing was a standout.
Ben Tarkus
6.67/10 score rank #20 of 21VOCALS 6PRODUCTION 7CHALLENGE 7I certainly picked up all the references, both musical and to a time when I used to frequent my local goth club, I don't think I'll ever forget the smell of clove cigarettes. The delivery of the lyrics I struggled with at times, I think the flow improved over the course of the song, but early on felt very out of rhythm and lacked that critical club element to pull the listener in off the jump
Klopfenpop
6.00/10 score rank #21 of 21VOCALS 6PRODUCTION 4CHALLENGE 8Gill's tempo shifted vocals definitely drift away from the beats tempo in the opening section in a way that doesn't feel intentional. It's close enough that if you adjust each stanza to be aligned, it would probably be fine. All of the vocals are pretty distorted and tinny. It's hard to make out the lyrics because of this. The beat overall sounds fine and feels at least a bit gothy. I dig the goth homage in the lyrics as well!
Richie Branson
6.00/10 score rank #21 of 21VOCALS 6PRODUCTION 6CHALLENGE 6Vocals being out of pocket with the beat hurt its clubbability, but I enjoy the flow switch ups. Palpatine reference is always appreciated as well. Production-wise, the beat is decent, sounds clubby. I don’t feel there was a recognizable switch in beat cadence tho. The vocal crunch is at a frequency that clashes with some of the synths, making it difficult to hear the vocals. Love the vocal chops and stutters.
Mark Cooper
5.67/10 score rank #20 of 21VOCALS 6PRODUCTION 6CHALLENGE 5production is definitely visable but I was a little confused about the direction of the song and it doesn't seem to fit the challenge overall. Vocals were a little all over the place and I could seem to find a format and in the prodcution, the sounds were not frequenced it best. Thank you for submitting.
Audience score and rank
AUDIENCE SCORE
Aggregated from 82 ballots cast by the public.
AUDIENCE RANK
Out of 21 teams competing this round.
- 19 voters ranked them in their top 10
- 8 voters had them in their top 5
- 0 voters picked them as their #1 favorite
FINAL BLEND
The final score was a 5.44. The song received an average voter score of 3.57 from the community, and an average judge score of 6.07.
The display score blends the audience and judges' contributions at 25%/75%. Here's how KKMDS's 5.44 broke down:
(3.57 × 25%) + (6.07 × 75%) = 5.44
YOUR SEASON SO FAR
- Round 1 5.05 / 10 rank #22
- Round 2 4.74 / 10 rank #22
- Round 3 5.41 / 10 rank #24
- Round 4 5.44 / 10 rank #21
- Round 5 7.00 / 10 rank #22 PERSONAL BEST