- Perfect 10 — Challenge from Mark Cooper · Richie Branson
- Full Package audio + art + lyrics + both writeups
TOTAL REACH — 22 plays rank 19 / 21
- VPC SITE 22
TOTAL LIKES — 3 rank 18 / 21
- VPC SITE 3
"Pop!"
Vocalist's challenge writeup
After hearing the beat, I got a flash of the Pack from 2005. So I thought Id try to make a club hit from the bay area without going full Base God. The melody was just playful and chaotic enough that I knew I could really mess around with my flow styles. I wanted to make a song that seemed general enough, but the more you listened, the more specific it got. Initially I wanted to fill the lyrics with parenthesis to connect everything, but Y'all are smart, you'll get it. This whole song was fun to write, but I'm most proud of the 1st bar. It really set the tone for everything else.
Producer's challenge writeup
I made it With a lot of trial and error and some amazing feedback from Ronin I decided to go bare bones with this track It’s essentially a simple beat with some synth played over it but Ronin was able to make it shine with some amazing bars!!
Lyrics
The heels go clique cuz we too sweet whole town got loud spillin loose leaf Old king pin(/ned) down Fill a new seat East side Gon ride Off the tootsies Curl up and die Don't fuck with the league It's lulla bye Used to look down When they came to see us But come correct now You can di-ta-beatus Yeah we do it for the Pop Yeah we gotta do it for the pop Yeah we really going through it But you know we gotta do it Gotta do it for the (2x) Yee we really start poppin off Gon pop these seeds And start to Pop and lock 2 step Hit that switch That shit goes on and off The guild gonna build running with an Entourage Whole stab Running wild Out here fuckin up the Ethos Oz fled the country He got caught up in a rico Sis Got washed by a bucket But that could never be me tho Comin up the line Lookin fine for the Migos Ugh Original recipe Not the power puff Leave the chem x alone That shit is sour stuff Imma give you til 3 Now your hours up You gon lickety split Now That's that coward stuff Ricky stanicky We run that joy ranch Should been coulda been sticky You broke that olly branch Represent Etiquette Benefit Off that laundry tag. Keep biting on the lollipop You suckin on that lolli-gag Yeah we do it for the Pop Yeah we gotta do it for the pop Yeah we really going through it But you know we gotta do it Gotta do it for the (2x) She Prayed for the “building” to stop But it's the right time Next in line for guild to Pop
JUDGES' BREAKDOWN
LEX the Lexicon Artist
7.67/10 score rank #18 of 21VOCALS 8PRODUCTION 7CHALLENGE 8This was one of my fav. Creative Complex tracks (the other one was Bodies). You guys shine when you get simple. Love the hyphy vibes here. Ronin really sells that shit, his energy and delivery here are off the charts. Myk - I think as usual there is a slight mixing/balance issue between vox and the beat, and I could have used a bit more complexity, but you really got the hyphy feel right. I'm not sure there were enough arrangement choices and "drops" to grant full points on the challenge, but I'd say you got pretty close to this being a certified club banger.
Ben Tarkus
6.67/10 score rank #20 of 21VOCALS 7PRODUCTION 7CHALLENGE 6I think taking the simple route for executing a song works in every challenge but this. I don't mind a simple and direct hook, but I would have liked to see stronger development in the club aspect and the overall vibe of the beat. The "ayyy"s definitely carried the song through the club element, but I would have liked more from the other facets of the challenge.
Richie Branson
9.00/10 score rank #8 of 21VOCALS 9PRODUCTION 8CHALLENGE 10I was hoping someone gave me that Drakeo The Ruler energy to this… and I’m also hearing a lil E-40 too. The beat is good, though I wish the melody went a different direction. The drums are great. Vocal energy is great. This is how you execute that off-beat cadence in a way that works on a club track.
Mark Cooper
8.00/10 score rank #11 of 21VOCALS 7PRODUCTION 7CHALLENGE 10Very melodic! Really dig the hook. verses are solid as well. I feel this is your best round submission this competition and I'm Happy to see it! Vocals are just a tad too loud but its clear. Careful with adlibs clashing with the main vocals. Production was solid. Ambience is always great but neailed the challenge in reference and production.
Klopfenpop
8.67/10 score rank #8 of 21VOCALS 9PRODUCTION 8CHALLENGE 9This is fantastic. I really love how hype your bars are. You're switching the flow all over the place and it feels great. Crowd hype for sure. Ayyyyyy! My arms are already in the air. Mike really brought it this round too! OnlyOneRonin's vocals sound way cleaner and more balanced than in past rounds. The beat feel good as well. I'd love to hear a little more dynamic rise and fall with the energy of the vocal performance. I would encourage you to try out a technique I like for cleaning up vocal plosives (like when the little P has a big low end puff with it). If you open an EQ plugin that shows you the audio your playing on the chart and see where that plosive lands. create a little dip at that spot, then set and shape it to mirror the plosive's bump. Then set the gain to 0, and open up the automation for the gain on that band. Then you can go right to the waveform where the plosive happens and pull the gain down like -5 to -13 dB only while that plosive is puffing. If you take the time to perform that "surgery" on each pop, you will have a WAY cleaner vocal. Unless the pops where part of the song concept, of course...
Audience score and rank
AUDIENCE SCORE
Aggregated from 82 ballots cast by the public.
AUDIENCE RANK
Out of 21 teams competing this round.
- 25 voters ranked them in their top 10
- 6 voters had them in their top 5
- 0 voters picked them as their #1 favorite
FINAL BLEND
The final score was a 6.99. The song received an average voter score of 3.95 from the community, and an average judge score of 8.00.
The display score blends the audience and judges' contributions at 25%/75%. Here's how The Creative Complex ‘26's 6.99 broke down:
(3.95 × 25%) + (8.00 × 75%) = 6.99
YOUR SEASON SO FAR
- Round 1 6.30 / 10 rank #16
- Round 2 5.71 / 10 rank #20
- Round 3 6.68 / 10 rank #19
- Round 4 6.99 / 10 rank #18
- Round 5 7.75 / 10 rank #13 PERSONAL BEST